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To what will not be
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 12:51:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I wish the night a
broken failure trembling
in the sun;
A thousand midnights
facing the carcass of
a new day.
I wish a violent
testimony pressing
the water,
Pressing the sky; a
sufferer, desirer, swift
pursuer,
Reaching the moonlights
descended hour, reaching
with regard
This descended hour,
to cradle in her arms
a still child,
And retch with bravery
her own demanding love
to what is,
To what will not be.
Copyright ©
iodinelove
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2005-06-28 00:51:36]
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Re: To what will not be
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by Shorty_88 on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 03:21:31 AM AEST
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Re: To what will not be
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 10:43:37 AM AEST
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Nice job...Some really good imagery in this write! The only thing I maybe would've done different would be to not use "Pressing" twice...Other than that, an enjoyable read...
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Re: To what will not be
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by boobiepeach on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 03:09:27 PM AEST
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A thousand midnights
facing the carcass of.....
a new day.
Good one. loved it
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