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WILL ALWAYS REMAIN
Contributed by
Shorty_88
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Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 07:12:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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As i sit here in my room
An image catches my eye
And after a while i realise
That it's everything i try to hide
I can see a girl so sad in her thoughts
Her tears form a river thats wild
She notices me and starts running like crazy
I chase after her for a while
As i run after her she shows me things
That only i would know
Reminding my soul of all the past hurt
Of events that occured years ago
Suddenly i find myself all alone
And as i look in the river i see
That the scared and sad girl i chased after so fast
Turned out in the end to be me
The next thing i know i'm right back in my room
With a tear falling from my eye
And when i think of what i have seen
I struggle trying not to cry
Believe it or not, to me this makes sence
And a lesson from it can be gained
I may think i've delt with the hurt in my past
But some sadness will always remain
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Re: WILL ALWAYS REMAIN
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by budge on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 08:18:07 AM AEST
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| a genuine emotion transferred beautifully in words everyone reflects on themselves so this poem should appeal to alot of other readers as it did to me well done!!! |
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Re: WILL ALWAYS REMAIN
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by brew on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 11:49:17 AM AEST
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Outstanding write. Saddness can play a dramantic part on ones self. Try and be happy.........in and out. Liked it
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Re: WILL ALWAYS REMAIN
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 11:57:37 AM AEST
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sweet bitter tears of saddness
well written
deep Innervision |
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Re: WILL ALWAYS REMAIN
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 09:39:45 PM AEST
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a very deliberate write..
filled with longing and the hope that things will be ok..
I really love the last stanza-
nice even flow..
throughout as well.
Great write
B |
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Re: WILL ALWAYS REMAIN
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 09:49:32 PM AEST
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excellent poem.
i liked it alot...we all try to run from ourselves at times...as long as we catch up, things will be fine.
wizard |
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