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Black and white
Contributed by
atticuskrazez
on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 10:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The darkness I see,this darkness ain't me;
It poisons my insides,disappears and hides;
I'm not sure if it stays,suspending my ways;
No matter which way I turn,the darkness does burn;
This is not who I am,I am not a dark man;
But some see through what I can't see;
I can't control the fire of my soul;
Does it make me who I am,once again I'm not a dark man;
I'm full of joy and rage,halo or cage;
Who is to say,I fight and I play;
I kick and hug,hate and love;
Love and hate,There's No more Debate.......
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atticuskrazez
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2003-01-07 22:40:00]
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Re: Black and white
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 12:49:35 AM AEST
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I like this made me think for those who know me that is surprising I know
'I can't control the fire of my soul;' sheesh how true that is...
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Re: Black and white
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by Olddarkme on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 07:43:36 PM AEST
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| This one never really gets into a flow. The idea is fine buy the rhyming is overdone and never let's itself become poetic. |
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