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Evil
Contributed by
GurlyTye
on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 01:48:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Sex, drums, rock and roll.
Sex appeal.
Evil snatching up your soul.
Drugs, booze.
Caught in a downward spiral.
As the blood begins to ooze.
The beating bass
Your pumping heart
See the terror in your face
You run this race
Lusty games
As seduction picks up the pace
Staggering down the walk
Labored breathing
Its prey, it seems to stalk.
Slashing, ripping, biting.
The bliss of life slips away
And it all seems so exciting,
Left to die alone
In excruciating pain
And your cold to the bone.
The sun begins to rise
The world wakes
To the sound of your cries
Deep in this pit it waits
As the hunger begins to rise
And soon hell will open up its gates
Copyright ©
GurlyTye
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2005-06-28 13:48:40]
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Re: Evil
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 01:58:55 PM AEST
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briliiant dark writing, flowed well,
pix xx |
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Re: Evil
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by gwenevere on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 02:07:24 PM AEST
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| very dark, very descriptive,very good.,/ros |
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Re: Evil
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by ROCKSTAR on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 09:12:00 PM AEST
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| its pretty great...i like it alot |
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