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Goths and why you are
Contributed by
LevyMetal
on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 04:58:48 PM in AEST
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Sold out by sell outs
Made you become a hand out
Secondary father of opinions
Lost without your minions
Time tells your reputation
Ruined by self mutilation
You are your own created filth
The underage trying to score a MILF
Thats what i heard about you
...Thats all I heard about...
Walking display of latest fashion
Hot Topic representative distraction
Jelly braclets and obnoxious belts
Listens to screamo and crys for help
You are your own mess
Trying to find someone new to impress
Sorry your parents dont dish out attention
But im tired of always seeing you in detention
You are your own mess
Doing your own laundry is your biggest stress
Nobody cares about how you wear designers
But who would when you sport black eyeliner?
Man, you are such a MESS
Not even a TEASE like your ex
You are just a mess
and its all you, man
Thats what i heard about you
...Thats all I heard about...
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Re: Goths and why you are
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by dolly_dagger on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 05:54:09 PM AEST
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HELL YEAH!!! the joys of teen angst lol. its fine unless ur one of the well-adjusted ones who has 2 put up with these goons. There was a girl i was speaking to who cries every day. I was like, "wow, excessive".
I find the best way to deal with them is just to do wot u do and write about it. Love the repetition of:
"Thats what i heard about you
...Thats all I heard about..."
Captured the superficiality of their whole world rather nicely :)
Thanks for that
xxxxxxxx dolly xxxxx |
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Re: Goths and why you are
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by justme03 on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 05:56:00 PM AEST
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this is a good poem ,it got ur point across, but i kinda disagree cuz i am goth and i kno we arent like attention deprived ppl. i cant speak for other goths but i kno i dress the way i do to show how i feel on the inside and it isnt for attention it is more liek a cry for help.
neway it still was a well written write with its meaning shown clearly.
~kortnie~ |
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Re: Goths and why you are
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by PoisonousPyscho on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 08:50:05 PM AEST
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| Okay even though i am really mad about how this is amined towards goth people i have to say it is a seriously good write ...i am a punk/goth whatever you want to call it but the reason i am goth/punk is because i believe in being unique and being different and proving that i can still be a great friend and be a good influence on ppl even tho im different...i admit i am depressed alot but it's not becasue i wear black or becaue i listen to heavey metal.... it's for reasons of my own like my mom's "problems" and stuff having ntohing to do with being goth ... |
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Re: Goths and why you are
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by weepingprophet on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 02:57:10 PM AEST
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I find it ever so amusing that people who are allegedly against "labels" and being the same have a group of their own where the members dress the same and "label" themselves "goth"/"punk". who an individual is, i don't believe, should be represented by what they wear or how they style their hair. people reflect themselves and should not be held responsible for an entire classification of people based on similarity in fashion style. how ignorant to believe that you have insight into another person's problems. Unless this was written to a person that you actaully "know", which i think is a stretch, this was such a shallow and reaching write. where is the substance? this is a lazy form of angst and i think it's pathetic. you should have titled this " i'm an ignorant f**k" maybe then it would have held some depth.
choke and die.
~weepingprophet
(i am not "goth" or "punk") |
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