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A Sonnet
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 09:50:57 PM in AEST
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I sailed and sailed upon the sea..
For days alone I seemed to be.
At last I saw a line arise
Between the sea and billowed skies..
It grew until it wore the shape
Of cove and shore and inlet cape-
Then hills and valleys, fields and woods..
Buildings, roofs and nieghborhoods.
I thought this time, 'I shall embark
Upon a plasmic sea more dark
Than's ever been and 'tween the skies
And frothy surf I'll see arise
Another world and time that lies
Between the sea and billowed skies.'
M.O.H.
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Re: A Sonnet
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 10:03:09 PM AEST
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what a fantastically written piece of work. you never disappoint with your amazing ability.
great job bro!!!
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Re: A Sonnet
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 10:12:21 PM AEST
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This piece has class, and the theme sets it apart as it isn't as repetitive as others I've seen.
I look forward to reading more |
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Re: A Sonnet
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 10:55:43 PM AEST
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| excellent sonnets, im always partial to them for there strictness, but ive written only one since i only had the patience for one. i write haikus, and thats about it for strict formatting. this is better than shakespeare sonnet at the beginning of romeo and juliette =] but then ive never been a fan of shakespeare. |
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Re: A Sonnet
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 10:58:05 PM AEST
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Oh My G.....!!! I am so glad I stayed and read your work!! I am impressed by this...
Excellent work!! Great structure and flow..
Thank you....
Jenni |
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Re: A Sonnet
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 01:37:17 AM AEST
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another touching home town revisited by the sea poem it don't get no better than this nice write bill, your making me home sick lol . . .
Ben |
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Re: A Sonnet
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by gwenevere on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 02:10:33 AM AEST
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| That's a journey I would like to go on.another great poem, keep them coming,Ros |
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Re: A Sonnet
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by brew on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 07:53:51 AM AEST
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It has flow, character, and all. Always, another wonderful write. Any write about the ocean is always a great one for me. Loves the water.
Brew~ |
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Re: A Sonnet
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 08:50:54 AM AEST
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a pure delight to read it flows and makes me want to go to the sea on a voyage so beautiful as always
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Re: A Sonnet
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by CarolinaBlue on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 09:47:32 AM AEST
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| This was another brilliant write! And it makes me long to go home to the water that I miss so dearly. Your poems always provide such a refreshing retreat from the daily monotony I sometimes refer to as life. ~R |
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Re: A Sonnet
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 11:00:32 AM AEST
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Ahhh...the man has discipline! Well done on a true sonnet. Very nice bit of storytelling...I myself, do not have the patience for a sonnet, but always enjoy reading a good one like yours...
Scorp. |
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Re: A Sonnet
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 11:58:14 AM AEST
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| One word - Awesome. chris. |
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Re: A Sonnet
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by jyssvw22 on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 08:37:23 PM AEST
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you should be ashamed of yourself
making the rest of us look like punks out here.....with these sick writes...wow....how dare you write so freakin well........sweet and sweet again...thanks so much for sharing....you have a gift... |
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Re: A Sonnet
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 10:16:46 PM AEST
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Sweetly soothing.....
I know you'll find that world Billy. |
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