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CANT FEEL MY HEART
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 02:45:33 PM in AEST
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im drowning in black water
im failing to breathe
im choking on tears
crying myself to sleep
im losing my faith
im going down slow
im calling out quiet
im lonely and cold
nobody cares
if i cast the first stone
if i am dying
if i am alone
im trapped in misery
im falling apart
i cant feel my soul
i cant feel my heart...
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Re: CANT FEEL MY HEART
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by spazz911 on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 03:14:28 PM AEST
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i care!!! jennie we've all been down, and let me help pull u back up
ps great write wish i could write that good, darn lol ur an awsome person
pss it NOT UR FAULT
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Re: CANT FEEL MY HEART
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by seci on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 03:53:12 PM AEST
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| i love this poem. ireally do. but whatever is on your mind maybe its not your fault but if you need someone to write to, you can always, pm me. i have no problem. i'm a easy person to talk to. again i love your write and keep writing. i'll keep reading. |
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Re: CANT FEEL MY HEART
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by seci on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 03:53:59 PM AEST
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| i love this poem. ireally do. but whatever is on your mind maybe its not your fault but if you need someone to write to, you can always, pm me. i have no problem. i'm a easy person to talk to. again i love your write and keep writing. i'll keep reading. |
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Re: CANT FEEL MY HEART
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by CarolinaBlue on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 10:21:24 PM AEST
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| all I can say is WOW! I have felt this way myself. Wish I could've expressed it as well as you did. Things do get better :-) ~R~ |
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Re: CANT FEEL MY HEART
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 10:16:48 AM AEST
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a very sad and painful write that spirals downward and downward... i hope that everything is well for you. keep your head high and keep up the fine writing.
dw |
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