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My Yellowed Soul
Contributed by
freckle
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Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 07:00:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My Yellowed Soul
Age rattles against my window
Exposing the faded years
I reach for them
As they begin to crumble
They blow away quickly
I bow my head
tears form
"Oh, come in" I sigh
As I let age
settle into my heart.
Carol
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2005-06-29 19:00:16]
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Re: My Yellowed Soul
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 09:14:53 PM AEST
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i enjoyed your poem...it reminds us to hold on to our youth.
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Re: My Yellowed Soul
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by CarolinaBlue on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 09:40:10 PM AEST
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Good write, you say so much with so little. I really liked this.
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Re: My Yellowed Soul
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 01:04:44 AM AEST
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4 as long as i live carol no matter how old i get i'll always love what u write and coment on your loving and pleasing 2 the heart poetry . . .
Ben |
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Re: My Yellowed Soul
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 03:31:10 AM AEST
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Awww Carolita, this was just beautiful. Aren't you just amazed on how time flies.
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Re: My Yellowed Soul
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by that_gypsy_fire on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 05:09:41 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this poem.. it made me appreciate the time I'm given that I so often take for granted. Nice job! |
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