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medicated
Contributed by
InMyDisk3yez
on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 10:16:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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i spaek child, i spaek in colourphul dreamz so bored, so alone without you here, so lost i don't want your drugz, heavily medicated i don't need your drugz, wrongfully sedated hey god, can you cure my hatred for life? hey man, can you give me drugz to kill my pain hey yeah, said the rattlesnake by your feet hey god, can you numb my animosity hey man, can you kill the world around me? hey jezus, can you drop your healing blood from your wrists, down onto me hey god, can you show me where i went wrong? backstage pass, for the ghost of zzmas past just walk alone, my child of the rayne, and spaek to no one spaek alone, my child of the wind, and walk with no one hey god, can't you pleaze my burning fist? hey doc, can't you medicate my sadness? hey man, can't you see where we went wrong? hey judge, can't you give me just one more try? hey god, can't you give us one more chance? hey drugz, theze people aren't listening to me hey doc, am i too heavily medicated? hey god, why can't they hear me? hey drugz, get this voice out of my head so walk alone, my child of the rayne give your mind to no one
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Re: medicated
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cathi on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2008 @ 02:38:38 AM AEST (User
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What a sad and beautiful poem! I can see the speaker's suffering and almost feel it myself. I love the use of words and punctuation. It makes the imagery and emotion beautifully vivid. Well written!
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