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Emporious
Contributed by
shnyzz
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Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 10:24:14 PM in AEST
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I have lived a thousand lives,
All within my head,
Regretting things that I've done,
Things that I have said,
Lost love time and time again,
That never seems to fail,
Traded a beachfront heaven,
For a corn cropped hell,
Left would be friends in the dust,
Not bothering to explain,
Not expecting to feel this way,
However I should not complain,
It all has made me who I am,
This person here today,
Without fear I alone have chose,
A very lonely way,
The path to freedom is hard to find,
When covered by leaves of doubt,
You must crush them under feet,
For the trail to sprout,
So I trodden along this way,
Thinking of lives gone by,
Living a bit too fast,
Never stopping to ask why.
Copyright ©
shnyzz
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2005-06-29 22:24:14]
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Re: Emporious
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 08:56:30 PM AEST
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Very good, and thought provoking. I enjoyed reading this.
Its really good, and I like it a lot. Nice job on this one, especially with the descriptions
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