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Hopelessness
Contributed by
poet_of_anger
on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 12:32:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Hopelessness
It is blinding me tonight
Lost in the edges of this broken knife
Thoughtlessness
It stings my heart tonight
Lost in the pages of my life
Every place I go
I seem to carry pain along
It follows and stalks me
It won't leave me alone
And so I call into question
The purpose of my being
My thoughts that betray
The actions that make me afraid
Hopelessness
It is blinding me tonight
Lost in the edges of this broken knife
Thoughtlessness
It stings my heart tonight
Lost in the pages of my life
Your eyes are deceitfull
They try to convince me of your lies
But I can see through them
Finding the truth that tries to hide
Do you really think I'm blinded
By the warmth that you provide
Your words like daggers
That reak havoc on my mind
Hopelessness
It is blinding me tonight
Lost in the edges of this broken knife
Thoughtlessness
It stings my heart tonight
Lost in the pages of my life
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Re: Hopelessness
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by blackholesun on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 12:36:50 AM AEST
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| sad as hell! but well done,i hope you really arent gonna kill yourself,ppl like u write how i feel it makes me not feel allone ...peace&love to you fellow poet |
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Re: Hopelessness
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 02:28:35 AM AEST
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Excellent write good flow and keeps the eye of the reader. I enjoyed that very much.
Thank you for sharing.
Whisper
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