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Time to Wake Up
Contributed by
AmyLee4Ever
on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 01:31:37 AM in AEST
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It's unclear what you'll fear
But you will need to overhear
To get strong and do no wrong
To finally belong
Don't let nobody hold you down
Let your talents be renown
You need to get competitive
And then be repetitive
Cause if you want this you won't stop
Until you can't help but to drop
Your time is now
So don't allow
No one else to disavow
Your own capabilities
And show their hostilities
Towards you
And let you not construe
Your own possible life
It'll make you cause a strife
Between yourself
And life itself
So wake up now or you won't see
Just how great you could be
Copyright ©
AmyLee4Ever
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2005-06-30 01:31:37]
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Re: Time to Wake Up
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by emystar on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 01:56:18 AM AEST
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Well I say you've found your knack in writing.
A masterpeice of great truth-n-wisdom. We all need these types of writing.
huggs,
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Re: Time to Wake Up
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by ForeverAlone on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 02:26:05 AM AEST
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argh....niceness...why do we have niceness...lol.jk..great job, tho i am more for cynical writing.. ;p
~Clark |
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Re: Time to Wake Up
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 01:25:40 PM AEST
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A wonderfully positive outlook to have, and an important message in this write as well. Nice job!
Scorp. |
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Re: Time to Wake Up
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 01:49:42 AM AEST
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| enjoyable as always with your writes. Just one thing thou what does disavow mean is it like dont let nobody put you down? |
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Re: Time to Wake Up
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 05:23:52 AM AEST
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Jodi, I am happy to read your first poem..
You' ve a nice expression..and very much positive..I wish you success in all your efforts...:-) venkat
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Re: Time to Wake Up
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 11:33:02 AM AEST
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| an excellent message how very wise of you ! i like it!! |
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