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tomorrow you'll choke me
Contributed by
weepingprophet
on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 02:28:19 AM in AEST
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the stillness of your breathing
the ease in your thoughts
the way you rest beside me
without and unknowing of loss
i have let you go
many times
ripped you from my chest
held my arm next to the crackle
the burn the sear
the stiffled test
your worth is more than a body
an occupant in my bed
you're existance is more invaluable
than the useless thoughts in my head
i hate the picture i have on my door
your face smiling down on me
i hate the hand you use to touch
i detest the key that you use out of trust
i'm changing for you
sacraficing before you
the person that i could be
every night i wake to the breath
the subtle exaustion
the inevitable death
and i don't fight the rush
the panic
i love you
you believe me
i'm empty
yesterday i told you
the intricate details of love
i'll never trust enough
yet you believe me
when i casually stutter denial
my beliefs my opinions
denied for you
you're vane and worthless
i'll see you tomorrow
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Re: tomorrow you'll choke me
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 03:01:25 AM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: tomorrow you'll choke me
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by Davinah on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 04:08:02 AM AEST
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| very good... |
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Re: tomorrow you'll choke me
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by Naughtygurl on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 07:03:45 AM AEST
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I love'd your poem. It makes sense which of coarse its supposed to but iono I just like your poem. Its a great write and I wouldnt mind reading more.
~~*Muffin*~~ |
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Re: tomorrow you'll choke me
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 07:55:51 AM AEST
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wow..I liked this a lot..
very profound and idealistic-
very very well written
you really bare yourself in the last stanza and line..
you've spawned a new reader here in me-
B |
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Re: tomorrow you'll choke me
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by Dri on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 12:58:09 PM AEST
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| beauty and,again, that bone breaking honesty. i love this so much!! |
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