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tommarows just another day
Contributed by
naughtygurl
on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 06:54:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sometimes I get lost,
And I can't find my way back
back to where I am,
or where I need to be.
There were times when I felt alone,
so alone.
I never had a hand to hold,
or something to hold on to.
The past is lost ,
and will never return
but the future is clear,
and the present is right now.
This pain is just sorrow
this pain is just hurt,
I just need someone to hold
I feel so confused ,
lost in my emotions
Nothings coming back
Still tommarows just another day.
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naughtygurl
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2005-06-30 06:54:26]
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Re: tommarows just another day
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 10:27:16 AM AEST
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much suffering in the body of the write...but, it ends with a happy truth. that, tomorrow is another day and live it good.
keep up the fine writing and thanks for sharing
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Re: tommarows just another day
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by Overstated on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 06:08:04 PM AEST
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i read this piece about 5 times - i trhink its really good and you should be pleased with the way its turned out ed the opening stanza 'Sometimes I get lost,
And I can't find my way back
back to where I am,
or where I need to be.' i thought this really draws the reader in to finding out more... well done!
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