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Dawning
Contributed by
harlot20
on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 03:10:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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I hear music in the dawn
As i watch the sunrise
In my bedroom window
Watching the sky tear open
Watching the clouds roll forward
See the whole world
Open its eyes, as if for
The first time
Scattered shadows on the ceiling
Early sun beams on the wall
Rays streak the morning
Getting brighter by the hour
I sit there in amazement
I want to reach up to the sky
To feel the new dawn rising
As soon as i come down from it
The choas begins
Cars running past my home
Traffic on the motorway
My home stirs
I slink back to sleep
To wake in time for dusk falls
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2005-06-30 15:10:59]
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Re: Dawning
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by Infamous on
Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 06:01:29 AM AEST
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| it is great.... but you shoul have put some rhyming words to make it more lonely. |
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