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Maybe, perhaps, out of love
Contributed by
thegurl
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Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 09:14:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'm not fairly certain what it is I did so terribly wrong and I'm not sure if I'll ever know even if you take the time to tell me again if I understand this at all then it will be exciting
I do not know if I have much of anything left at least anything worth giving that you'll want unless you decide that having me is enough
I felt used and cheap that day I left without you angry and bitter at myself for letting you get in no longer can I blame everyone around me for each and every problem I have in my life
I'm sorry to say I believe that was the last time that I will feel the sweet comfort of your bed though you said we were taking a break I knew something inside of me told me to prepare
I spent days crying cause I was ready for the worst
I hope you still understand I'm trying to fix it fix me and all these things about me that you hate
maybe you've decided it's finally time to stand up walk away from this hole you've fallen in that wretched bitter sweet hole called love and perhaps I'm not fading from you just falling to pieces.
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Re: Maybe, perhaps, out of love
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