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Shadows
Contributed by
PoisonousPyscho
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Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 09:36:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Shadows
These shadows are killing
Killing us all
These shadows are tearing
Tearing us apart
They come in times of darkness
When you arent strong enough to see
They come into our homes and lives
They teach us misery
These shadows are hiding
Hiding in the dark
These shadows are destroying
Destroying this world
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2005-06-30 21:36:07]
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Re: Shadows
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by BloodyTearDrops on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 09:40:58 PM AEST
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Hey,
I liked this poem. I dont think it sucked at all. You have very good skills. You can write good. If you make it longer it would have been even better. But i like it just how it is.
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Re: Shadows
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 10:59:16 PM AEST
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So true, I cannot sleep at night sometimes because of this, and em on sleeping meds, But when I call to God, When I speak the name of Jesus Christ, believe me thier Gone, But you have to believe completely, just like when a dog sences fear, they can sence when u believe!!!!!!!
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