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We spoke nothing
Contributed by
gequetscht
on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 09:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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She is delecate and pale
And she weeps bitterly
Because she wants to be with him
Now shes a casualty
She always knew that lovers were victims
Her eyes speak love
She never thought he saw it
But theyre all thats on his mind
Shes so empty
Here without him
And he reaches out for her
But always when shes not looking
She wants to give him her heart
She wants to give him everything
He told everyone but her that he'd accept
In his ice blue eyes
She holds so much
And sometimes
She wishes that she never chased after him
Never wanted to know his name
That he never wanted to talk to her
But most of all, she wishes that she didnt feel that way
Because all she wants
Is him
And who he wants
Is her
And they feel the longing
And together
They never said anything
Because she knows he knows
Hes her choking victim
And shes his razor kiss
And every one tells them that theyd be good together
Everyone tells them to take that chance
But still they say nothing
Of the way that they feel
Though its always on their minds
What do they do
When they say nothing to each other
But told everyone else
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2003-01-08 09:20:00]
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Re: We spoke nothing
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by that1girl on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 11:24:11 PM AEST
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| well, the reason why you don't write love poetry so often is because, after this, how could you write another thing with more emotion? it's amazing. i really like the imagery and metaphors. my favorite part is "he's her choking victim and shes his razor kiss". that is very spectacular writing. |
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