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Pain
Contributed by
dorkfish
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Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 11:23:10 AM in AEST
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Hate driven
Blinded by confidence
Lured by thoughts
Filled with self-love
Alone and scared
Pain infested
Wasteful tears
Feeding the drive
Unknown power
Need for control
Aided by opinions
No remorse
Anger hidden
Cannot speak
Fearing loneliness
No place for comfort
Doomed in heart
Changed in mind
No sense of wrong
Dealing by escape
Seeing the good
Loving the old
Chasing pretend
Pain indused
Loathing the inside
Building walls
Love lost
No need for revival
Accepting the words
Hiding the truth
Offering a save
Living in denial
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dorkfish
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2005-07-01 11:23:10]
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Re: Pain
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by BloodyTearDrops on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 11:49:35 AM AEST
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Nice poem. I like it as i say to all the other people...Great writing. Keep it up.
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Re: Pain
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 02:05:57 PM AEST
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Nice job with this...I like how it's sort of contradictory. I get a sense of resentment, yet acceptance. Good expression and the format works too.
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Re: Pain
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by boobiepeach on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 01:35:24 PM AEST
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"Loathing the inside"
Hummm
sounds like it could be about yourself or about another. good job with this poem. emotionally driven. sounds real.
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Re: Pain
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 03:02:21 PM AEST
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Great write. His thoughts, your thougts every other one. It does sound like you are in denial that it is over and will not be revived. You cannot make someone love you. Even if you could keep him there it would never be like before. He has gone on in his mind without you. It would be a very lonely life for you. Let him go. If he comes back, it was meant to be. If not, you have to move on with your life. The universe continues to turn even if you get stuck in one place refusing to move on. Great write with passionate feelings.
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Re: Pain
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 12:35:54 PM AEST
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Really a tough situation....Rita is right though... You should accept it and move on if things don't change soon...
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