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I Wish...
Contributed by
eternityandaday4u
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Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 11:32:59 AM in AEST
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i wish i knew why you couldn't love me
i wish i knew you well
because you used me and abused me
then put me through hell
i wish i knew why you left
that day and never said good bye
i wish i knew the high you get
by always making me cry
i wish i knew why i never mattered
and why you never cared
i wish i knew why i let you in
and every secret with you i shared
i wish i knew my self alittle better
maybe you wouldn't have gone
i wish i knew why the war i lost
and it seemed that you had won!!
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Re: I Wish...
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by BloodyTearDrops on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 11:46:42 AM AEST
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I like the way you wrote this. It goes out to every boy i think. It shows people how you really feel about guys. Wonderful peice of work!
Chelsey |
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Re: I Wish...
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by MeenieMo on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 01:09:43 PM AEST
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| Great write...I've often wondered that too. i often do things on impulse and I am often vulnerable. Great emotion. |
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