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madsad
Contributed by
Halogod50
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Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 01:16:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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she left without saying goodbye,
for this i feel i could die,
im 1% mad, 99% hurt,
my heart feels like its been burnt,
left to vancouver without notice,
now to san jose with a motive,
all i can do is hope shes ok,
with (name removed) she will stay,
old enough to make her own decisions,
hope there is no bad ramifications,
guess my friendship didnt mean that much to you,
you evil *****, i hope hes mean to you.
i dont mean that cause i love you,
i just want whats best for you.
wanted to give you a letter,
God knows it would have made me feel better,
but you just up and ******* left,
yet i will always care,
hoping for you the best.
goodbye Mel,
HOPE YOU FEEL WELL.
Copyright ©
Halogod50
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2005-07-01 13:16:35]
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Re: madsad
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by ChrissyMarie on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 01:24:37 PM AEST
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| not bad for you first poem. It tells exactly how you feel. always tell how you feel about things I think it makes the best poetry. |
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