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echoing whispers
Contributed by
hardrocker15198916
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Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 01:47:55 PM in AEST
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oops
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whispers linger in the air
caving in the stony room
apearing to not have a care
forbidden pleasures doom
calling out to something unfaded
so silent to me now
calling to an abyss far and wide
so secretly pleasant; How?
screaming out to burst my lungs
the calls do not even echo
but can you blame them as you hung
and who would ever know
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2005-07-01 13:47:55]
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Re: echoing whispers
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by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 01:58:24 PM AEST
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Good poem, the ending is great too, Good job all around
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Re: echoing whispers
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 03:31:08 PM AEST
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| time is golden and so is this poem great job look forward to more for you |
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