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A Love Poem
Contributed by
Willofree
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Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 04:45:44 PM in AEST
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Heart races with anticipation
There it was in the mailbox
She clasps the letter to her bosom
Savoring the moment
With shaking hands she opens the letter
Her body trembling with excitement
She slowly devours each precious syllable
Her pulsating heart flooding her with desire
As she reads on, she is aflame with passion
She can feel his body there
His scent, his touch, as if he were present
She is engulfed in a flood of love
Oh how she aches for him
Every fiber of her being tingling
In her mind she envisions them together
Embraced in a total expression of love
Her breathing rapid and panting
She moans as her desire peaks
And cries her tears of longing
For the day they are together, and complete
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Willofree
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2005-07-01 16:45:44]
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Re: A Love Poem
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by CarolinaBlue on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 04:57:21 PM AEST
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| Extremely sensual and passionate! Great write. This is exactly how I feel about my love who is thousands of miles away in another country. Two thumbs up! :-) ~R~ |
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Re: A Love Poem
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by BloodyTearDrops on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 04:57:21 PM AEST
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This is a really good love poem. It is full of love.
.:Chelsey:.
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Re: A Love Poem
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 04:59:47 PM AEST
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Hot stuff Will...must be some letter!! lol I like your expression in this write. The passion is displayed well...
Scorp. |
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Re: A Love Poem
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 05:22:40 PM AEST
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Mmmm Will...this was really good....
Thanks for the special feelings this evoked...
Jenni |
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Re: A Love Poem
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by brew on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 07:55:00 PM AEST
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very intense, yet shyness to it..........made you feel what the love was feeling. I loved it. That the way one should feel about someone who they want,and need.
Brew~ |
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Re: A Love Poem
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 02:53:35 AM AEST
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What a sensual write Will. I love your simple yet beautiful words. I wonder where my letter is hmmm..
Amazing piece of poetry as always.
Jane xoxoxox |
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Re: A Love Poem
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by boobiepeach on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 11:07:00 AM AEST
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very sexy. i liked this, wonderful write.
complete a very silly expression, used often, but so right dont you think? a word that describes so much with just 2 sylobals.
good emotion. me liky
peach.
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Re: A Love Poem
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by Dorkfish on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 11:36:26 AM AEST
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| Hey, that was pretty sensual. Good job. My only thought it is seems to of ended so abruptly. It kinda seems like it needed a little more. Good job though, I like the emotion and wording in it. |
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Re: A Love Poem
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 12:21:06 AM AEST
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Very sensual moving write.
Shannon |
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Re: A Love Poem
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:37:12 AM AEST
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Beatifully expressed. The emotions spill out onto the page
with ease; the last stanza almost torturous. I love this poem.
So full of longing and warmth and passion! Excellent write!
~Breezy |
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Re: A Love Poem
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by candysears on
Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 09:40:07 PM AEST
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This love poem is bursting longing...Love...The old fashion kind...lol
I just love this write...
I will give you a high 5....
I use to read my husband letters and dream of him being here...So I can relate....
God Bless!
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