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THE FINGER
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 05:43:38 PM in AEST
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Lost love forever and true
lost me when I lost you
found me in anothers arms
forgot us in an instant
roses are a symbol of love
this finger is a symbol of love lost
my faith, my trust, my heart paid the cost
of dealing with love lost
so when you look my way
my finger says all i have left to say
sign language just for you
my symbol of lost love, like it?
this fingers words now
completly honest and true
Now this finger is all for you!
nperry2005
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brokenwings
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2005-07-01 17:43:38]
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Re: THE FINGER
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by BloodyTearDrops on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 06:50:23 PM AEST
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GREAT POEM!!
.:Chelsey:. |
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Re: THE FINGER
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 07:26:28 PM AEST
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A very well written piece of poetry filled with anger, pain and resentment. I hope u build up the strength to move on. I hate to see u suffering like the way u r now.
hugs,
dreamer |
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Re: THE FINGER
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 08:12:55 AM AEST
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*laughs*
good work. |
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Re: THE FINGER
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 03:26:27 PM AEST
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| simply smashing baby. Great write i can relate wish you the best of luck and happiness will follow |
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Re: THE FINGER
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 07:14:12 PM AEST
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verrryyy creative and clever, i love it:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:-
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Re: THE FINGER
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by fireispassion on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 08:00:59 PM AEST
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| i like your poem it entriging!! ( i think i spelt that wrong!) oops! anyway i like your poem a lot!! nice job |
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