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~*Remember*~
Contributed by
BloodyTearDrops
on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 05:48:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Remember me when I am gone away,
Gone far away into the silent land;
When you can no more hold me by the hand,
Nor i half turn to go yet turning to stay,
Remember me when no more day by day,
You tell me of our future that you planned:
Only remember me: you understand,
It will be late to counsel then or pray.
Yet if you should forget me for a while,
And afterwards remember, do not grieve:
For if the darkness and corruption leave,
A vestige of the thoughts that i once had,
Better by far you should forget and smile,
Than that you should remember and be sad.
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2005-07-01 17:48:48]
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Re: ~*Remember*~
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by worldsenigma on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 06:34:42 PM AEST
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*shakes head rigoriously*
ok, that was a little confusing
but i got it
i like it..its pretty cool i like the idea
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Re: ~*Remember*~
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 09:11:27 PM AEST
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nice poem... i liked it! but i hope you realize that you are important and that people will remember you. like me, i'll remember you through this poem! please, don't feel alone. good write, keep up the good work!
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