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A Dancing Memory Of You...
Contributed by
eternal_dreamer
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Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 06:38:37 PM in AEST
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I was walking through the meadow
Soaking in the glorious views
As the flowers were starting to dry
After the springtime morning's dew
I admire all the beauty
Cast before my eyes
As I breathe a sigh of relief
It reminds me of our last goodbye
I remember how we held each other
Your strong firm hand in mine
We danced amidst the dazzling flowers
The day so young and fine
The breeze orchestrated merrily
Amongst the singing blue bells
We were so happy and in love
Now my eyes with tears they swell
That was the dreaded last time
We'd share our graceful dance
You're no longer with me
I've lost our fairytale romance
So each and everyday
I make my way to the meadow
As the breeze blows gently
I can see us dancing in the shadows
We dance away well into the day
Until the sun sets again once more
Were I take the image of me and you
With me as I head for home's shore
This dancing memory I have of you
Comes to life every day
While I walk through the meadow
You slowly dance my way...
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Re: A Dancing Memory Of You...
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 01:26:07 PM AEST
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Oh Dreamer..this is really beautiful.... I had such a tranquil feeling after reading this... even tho it was very sad..it's also filled with so much peace....
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Re: A Dancing Memory Of You...
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 08:15:21 PM AEST
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What a vividly beautiful tale...So pure in it's emotion. The last two stanzas were especially moving...Nicely done!
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Re: A Dancing Memory Of You...
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 09:02:19 PM AEST
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So absolutely beautiful dreamer..
Very very well written.. this write.
A bombardment of emotion.. finesse-
Totally awesome..
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Re: A Dancing Memory Of You...
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 12:29:08 PM AEST
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Tranquil and touched with much sadness.
This was a beautiful write. You have another fan
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: A Dancing Memory Of You...
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 07:02:03 PM AEST
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I have lived this love and this loss. Yes, I feel my love in the breeze as he gently touches my cheek. I feel him blow gently my hair to let me know he is beside me. Beautiful, dear dreamer.
Rita |
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Re: A Dancing Memory Of You...
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 07:45:52 PM AEST
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absolutely beautiful, an exquisite piece of poetry:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: A Dancing Memory Of You...
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:32:02 PM AEST
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an outstanding write...very well done
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Re: A Dancing Memory Of You...
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 09:38:03 PM AEST
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| =] i dont usually read anything in this category, but this poem has made me think differently. one of the better pieces i have read on this site, and thats saying something. keep up the splendid work. |
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Re: A Dancing Memory Of You...
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 06:17:47 PM AEST
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How are your poems so perfect? : ) You called it your fairytale romance, and this whole poem felt like a fairy tale that came to life... but this one ended unhappily. It didn't feel like a poem that was screaming out pain though. It was a poem that sent the feeling of slow emotions. I don't know if that makes any sense. It just seemed as if your life was slow moving and you just sat still thinking of you loss. You seemed gloomy and quite... not screaming out pain. Lol... I keep going on saying saying what I am sure you already know. : ) Thanks you for another great write...
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Re: A Dancing Memory Of You...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 07:09:11 AM AEST
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I like this style of writing much more then
my own lol
great job here five for you
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Re: A Dancing Memory Of You...
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 02:54:51 AM AEST
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I know I've already posted a comment, but I happened upon it again and could'nt help myself..lol
What an incredibly beautiful write.. this-
Stanzas 5 and 6 especialy.. (as I melt)
As Always,
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Re: A Dancing Memory Of You...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 09:55:46 PM AEST
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Tissue please!!
A beautiful way of explaining a memory. One to hold in your heart forever. Now I hold it in mine. The natural beauty of love in nature. Oh yes, everything is decorated in love.
Well it was difficult to read fast, my tears kept getting in my view. I managed to get through it alright.
Ok, so now that I am finishing crying, I will re-read.
Oh no, here comes the tears..
Beautiful fairytale romance. I do believe it was real though. Fairytales are misleading. This one does not lead me on. Nope, it was real alright. It would not even pass as a made up story. No, my love, what you had was very real. And, the memories are read too. Huggs..
Thank you for this powerful write.
Raquel Leah :D |
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Re: A Dancing Memory Of You...
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by Archie on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 06:55:48 PM AEST
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This poem reminds me of a song
"Dancing bears painted wings
things i long to remember
and a song someone sings
once upon a december
Some one hold me safe and warm
hearts unfold in a silver storm
figures dancing gracefully
upon my memory"
Quote from "Once upon a December" from "Anastasia"
Thanks for such an inspirational poem. |
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Re: A Dancing Memory Of You...
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 07:56:56 AM AEST
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This was beautiful. I've been here before, the place where the past is too far to hold, but close enough to see. May your past be a glad memory, with sadness far away.
Take care.
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Re: A Dancing Memory Of You...
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by DreamPoetess on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 10:16:41 PM AEST
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Lovely sad write, the sense of beauty shines through:>
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Re: A Dancing Memory Of You...
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 12:40:38 PM AEST
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A wonderful and lovely poem.
Take care.
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Re: A Dancing Memory Of You...
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 10:05:58 AM AEST
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If there were a catergory called magic this poem would fit perfect. What beautiful poetry
you write. Very worthy of 5 stars and a vote indeed.
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Re: A Dancing Memory Of You...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th January 2011 @ 02:02:50 AM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful and also sad, Suzie Q. Great writing.
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