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Contributed by
hauntedscorp
on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 07:33:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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As you walk on by, will you call my name?
or will you walk away
When I phone, will you greet me?
or will silence speak
Would you acknowledge me, if we passed on the street?
or would I be lost in the crowd
If I wrote you a love letter, would you reply?
or would it be tossed in the fire
What time of day do you take, to think of me?
or am I the last thing on your mind
Where can I meet you, so we could talk?
or do you have nothing to say
How should I help you, out of your shell?
or would you rather be left
Who does your heart sing for, any chance me?
or is it forever mute
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hauntedscorp
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Re: Reserved
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by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 07:57:49 PM AEST
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hmm, i like the thought in this, its very appealing to ask questions like that, the mystery is something that keeps them coming back, great job
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by shelby on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 08:14:52 PM AEST
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loved the style here my friend your always a joy to read
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 08:50:54 PM AEST
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Scorp an interesting and thought provoking piece of poetry. Ure a truly talented poetess whose amazing abilitly shines through her brilliant work. Another outstanding piece from u.
hugs,
dreamer |
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Re: Reserved
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 09:24:03 PM AEST
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| This really touched me. It very much expresses alot of the feelings I have been having lately. |
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Re: Reserved
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 01:43:38 AM AEST
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| I must say that I am sure many of us have had these same thoughts (questions?) but you express them in such a compelling fashion. Another awesome write from the one & only Scorp. |
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 02:46:57 AM AEST
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A very profound write. I like the way it all blends together to form a unique poem.
Cool write Scorp.
Jane xoxox |
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Re: Reserved
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 01:48:29 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking and moving write!!! Beautifully done,
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Re: Reserved
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 03:50:23 AM AEST
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| this is very touching I like the what time of day part great writing will always read and comment on your poems |
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Re: Reserved
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 01:31:06 PM AEST
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Wow... I really liked this one. Really really like it. Lol... until now I never put any thought into how a silence speak does make sense. It makes a lot of sense actually. This poem grabbed me in even from the title. Great write yourself, and, once again, thanks for the comments on mine...
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Re: Reserved
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 05:07:07 PM AEST
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Scorp..I love the longing in this..
but I wonder..
(scartchin' my head)
Is it worth it..
Your friend and confidant..
B |
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Re: Reserved
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 12:51:40 PM AEST
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Another awesome write
Astounding
Love Angelxxxx |
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