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kiss
Contributed by
priss
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Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 08:41:22 PM in AEST
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you kissed me
i kissed you back
i thought we were there to talk about art
and poetry and history.
but that kiss,
lovely, lovely bend of tongue.
i understand why we stopped talking
it was like you were blowing nitrous oxide kisses at me
and i was catching them in my dreams
and when i woke up,
you had my honey thighs wrapped around your skin
like cellophane,
suffocating your pores.
then you took a breath
and your lips quivered into a smile.
under that light,
they looked like they belonged
to me.
Copyright ©
priss
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2005-07-01 20:41:22]
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Re: kiss
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 03:47:46 PM AEST
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| I ESPECIALLY LIKE LINE SIX... MAKES ME LONG FOR THAT KIND OF KISS THE ONE THAT MAKES YOU FEEL LIKE THERE IS NO OTHER UNTIL OF COURSE.......THERE IS... GREAT WRITE... |
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Re: kiss
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 02:41:31 PM AEST
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priss .. just, WOW!
oh .. I know this deception of heart .. for it is a deception
of sorts .. (cruel, cruel emotional organ!) That last line
is so heartbreaking, if only from the perspective that
our sad human hearts are so hopeful and wishful ...
I feel ya in this. I truly do ..
~Breezy |
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Re: kiss
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th January 2010 @ 10:04:52 AM AEST
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Whoa...freaking freaking excellent!!!! Holy censored!!! I fully understand those moments when the talking stops and it spontaneously turns into...wow...something else and this conveys that moment with utmost finesse...and utmost hotness.
*whew*
Tim
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