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Cold and Unwanted
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 09:36:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Im cold and unwanted
Im broken and busted
I have no warmth
I have little of my strength
Thrown out in the cold
Left on my own, all alone
Left with not a friend
Left just wanting the end
Because Ive been broken and busted
Im left cold and unwanted
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2005-07-01 21:36:30]
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Re: Cold and Unwanted
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by spazz911 on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 10:20:24 PM AEST
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ur not unwanted ur a very wanted person *wink wink* no seriously i dig ur feelings on this...i feel like this alot
and beautiful short but sweet write, pure brillance
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Re: Cold and Unwanted
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 02:17:23 PM AEST
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Nice job Sprints! You captured the essence of despair in so few words...Good job!
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