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Sweet dreams and goodbye
Contributed by
arilyn
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Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
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I guess this is goodbye
sleep soundly where you lye
you were the one to give yourself up
leave me alone
and add to my pain
i see your face in the on-comeing rain
or remember how you tasted from a candy cane
maybe your not the only one to blame just know i dont regret hope you feel the same
You were a tiger with a heart too wild for the world to tame
in the end pple who didnt even know you talked of how you were just plain
but in my eyes you were destined for fame
the sky will never look the same
hope you know how you changed my world
maybe i was deft to not hear what you implied on that phone call where to me you cried
but now the ground is where you lye
im sorry but sweet dreams and goodbye
Copyright ©
arilyn
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2003-01-08 12:00:00]
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Re: Sweet dreams and goodbye
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by chantel on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 01:39:56 PM AEST
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he called you the day he did it?
i am so sry i know it must have been preety hard and i really enjoyed reading this one have a nice day
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Re: Sweet dreams and goodbye
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 05:17:44 PM AEST
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| OMG this was so terribly sad I really feel for you & hope there will be brighter days for you soon,Christina |
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Re: Sweet dreams and goodbye
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 07:04:54 PM AEST
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Omg this is so incredibly touching! It's so sad, but this is just a beautiful piece of writing. I know it won't mean much, but I'm sorry for your loss. I hope someone who is troubled reads this and really thinks about it. Amazing job.
~ MoonlitAngel |
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Re: Sweet dreams and goodbye
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by arilyn on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 06:24:03 PM AEST
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| Thankyou thats very sweet of you and im glad you liked my poem! have a wonderful day and year! -Arilyn |
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Re: Sweet dreams and goodbye
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 04:15:50 PM AEST
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| oh...this is such a sad poem...it really moved me...wow...this is beautiful... |
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