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You are EVERYTHING
Contributed by
janie
on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 11:44:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Can't you see your reflection
In the sparkling tear
Traveling the well-worn path
Down my soft cheek?
The proof that my life's
Moments of misery
Come to be
Because of your
Scorn and mockery,
Just as my laughter and grins
Appear due to your
Incredibility.
Oppisition defines you
As you stab into my flesh
And gently clean the blood,
But it flows so heavily
And you bandages can no longer heal me.
Copyright ©
janie
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2005-07-02 11:44:35]
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Re: You are EVERYTHING
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by Anne-ish on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 02:11:58 AM AEST
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I know what you mean... The irony is expressed beautifully in - "As you stab into my flesh/And gently clean the blood".
Few spelling corr: "Opposition", and "your" on front of bandages.
God bless. |
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