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Detangled Dreams
Contributed by
chantel
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Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 02:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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You here her screaming
she deliriously cries to the sea
she spent half her life dreaming
she wonders "how can it be"?
felling the bottles that held her beer
they overflow with that last tear
disturbing noises fill her head
she sings glorious notes of terror
while she heres mokes wishing she where dead
she remembers the false fellings she lead
she opens her eyes "what happened she screamed"
she was drowned by lies
then she relized it was all a dream
all her fellings she had kept
came out to haunt her as she slept
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chantel
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2003-01-08 14:20:00]
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Re: Detangled Dreams
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 04:15:06 PM AEST
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Sometimes it's hard for us to see what really is going on but then it all does make perfect sense...this is a deeply written poem with so many emotions to it...thanks for sharing this one Chantel i enjoyed this one...she deliriously cries to the sea.....that's my favorite line....
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Re: Detangled Dreams
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by chantel on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 04:39:59 PM AEST
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agian thank you i read a poem of yours tody that mad me cry so bad i really enjoy your art and creativity
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Re: Detangled Dreams
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by wordsy on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 10:37:31 PM AEST
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Words well woven.
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