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When Tomorrow Becomes Today
Contributed by
Luka
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Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 01:04:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
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When tomorrow becomes today
My life will be waisted away
There's nothing left to say
That's the way the rug will lay
When tomorrow becomes today
The world will never stop
All your ideas tend to flop
You can never get away
No matter what you say
When tomorrow becomes today
Have to walk before you crawl
All that just to fall
And the world will someday end
And nothing will transcend
When tomorrow becomes today
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Luka
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2005-07-03 01:04:25]
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Re: When Tomorrow Becomes Today
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by waos on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 01:50:45 AM AEST
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That was kinda good, interesting thought and a good beginning rhythm,
keep at your writing and you'll continue to improve. I know I have, so you
will to. Good work.
~Kara |
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