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Gentle Manly Messed Up

Contributed by Exodus on Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 04:37:15 PM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry



Yea, I'm so messed up
Yea, and so are my friends
At the party we like it
Let's do it again

Sometime soon
Underneath the grinning moon

There's a man in there
I can feel his stare

Yea, we happen to find
A bunch of honeys waiting
I see her walking in
And I'm contemplating

Hey little sweetheart
Let me have this dance
Put me under with notice
Stuck lightly and I like your pants

Yea, I'm so messed up
And I'm laughing with my friends
They be wonderin' where we go
They be lookin' to see where I went

Nevermind little darling
Underneath the light of the moon
I'll see you some other time
For now its time for me to head to the back room

We take it lightly
And the papers' burnin' brightly

This could get crazy
Especially since we're so messed up
I hope you didn't notice
I told them I didn't like her make-up

I hope the tap doesn't run dry
Oh me and oh my my

Stuck outside grinning
As the world is messed up and it just keeps on spinnin'

You've given up on me
This is how things are gonna be

Volatile and corrupted
You've been thoroughly interrupted

I hope with all the things I have in me
Messed up beyond imagining

Hurling myself towards disaster
Chaotic I wait there until after

Take you to the back room
Underneath the moon

There's a man in there
I seem to have grown into his stare

Probably
Possibly

I am all the things I never thought I'd be

You're so pretty
And I'm just pretty messed up
Kiss me lightly on the cheek
I am "gentle manly" and I will definitely fill your cup




Copyright © Exodus ... [ 2006-07-17 16:37:15]
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Re: Gentle Manly Messed Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Catalina on Sunday, 21st September 2008 @ 01:30:21 PM AEST
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I really could relate to the write. The heading is what threw me off. but the poem was great!


Re: Gentle Manly Messed Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 09:16:40 AM AEST
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I though this was going to be a depressing poem but it wasn't . It was good though!


Re: Gentle Manly Messed Up (User Rating: 1 )
by lnnie on Friday, 3rd October 2008 @ 05:49:43 AM AEST
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Loved this poem. Wow. The writing the honesty. the courage. Poetry is saying what other people won't.
Keep writing!




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