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Outshined - Outweighed
Contributed by
tiggytom
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Wednesday, 16th January 2008 @ 09:19:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Unsure now of how I should proceed
Outweighed by the thought of losing greed
Trapped is the way I must now feel
I always thought, the side effects of need
Alone now is how I want to feel
As one now is how I want to be
The way it has all been planned before
No longer is valid on the floor
So come now and take your place with me
Let's do away with all the things they need
Let's keep all the knowledge we have won
Leave them just dwelling on the one
I hope that someday we will succeed
And as one we'll be given what we need
Forgiving the ones who made us bleed
For they were mislaiden due to breed
Not chased were you down the street and lynched
As we have all now been pinched
No longer do we heed your call
Next frequenxcy, all memory is stored
So i thank you for your leave throughout this time
I so gladly will leave you all behind
Copyright ©
tiggytom
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2008-01-16 09:19:00]
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Re: Outshined - Outweighed
(User Rating: 1 )
by UnknownLegend on
Wednesday, 16th January 2008 @ 11:09:31 AM AEST
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| The poem had some content but the fact that you had to make up words confused me .... I'm sorry |
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Re: Outshined - Outweighed
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by marino on
Wednesday, 16th January 2008 @ 08:42:56 PM AEST
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| I really really like your writing , you have a great style that flows and I feel I can relate. Thankyou. Keep on writing |
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