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true love devine
Contributed by
forgotten_poet
on
Sunday, 10th February 2008 @ 05:53:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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in my eyes you'll come to find in it's beauty lies true love, devine
upon these lips a soft reply a passionate kiss a quiet sigh
a gentle touch of a love so bold comes from my hands that are yours to hold
in my arms a place to hide and i'll give you my heart yours for mine
-andy-
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Re: true love devine
(User Rating: 1 ) by UnknownLegend on
Monday, 11th February 2008 @ 04:50:40 AM AEST (User
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Every once in a while I come across a poem that I can relate to and understand ...... so simple in words yet speaks volumes. This I liked ...... I'm no critic but to simplify the last 2 stanzas and Keep the meter would change it to this ..... but it's great the way it is.
a gentle touch
of a love so bold
comes from my hands --- comes from hands
that are yours to hold ---- are yours to hold
in my arms
a place to hide
and i'll give you my heart --- i'll give you my heart
yours for mine --- your heart for mine
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