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Broken Porcelain

Contributed by karoody on Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 12:42:39 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished



I ask you about the coming storm
You excuse it away as nothing
Dirt swept under the rug
I let go of a sigh
The phone rings
You turn your soul around
To make sure the cracks aren't showing
It's so sad the lies we tell
To get through a day
I wonder if you even know who you are
It's been so long since I saw you
Yet you're right in front of me
I love you, to the point of agony
But I have to love me to
And I can't save you
I must walk away
You're not going to understand
You'll resent me
Hopefully one day forgive
Maybe one day we can close this book
And laugh at these cracks
Instead of hide them




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Re: Broken Porcelain (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 01:15:04 PM AEST
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hon, what a sad painful write. how brutal people can be on our hearts and never even know it..I have to step away and collect Myself when I read these writes.. Lane


Re: Broken Porcelain (User Rating: 1 )
by Recyclebin on Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 02:41:46 PM AEST
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Yeah .. I'm with crow... I have to walk away for a moment also.
I dont know what to say... for the first time I'm speachless, usually I can collect myself and respond, but this has silenced me.
~Bin~


Re: Broken Porcelain (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 09:13:16 PM AEST
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Awww Hun, this is heartbreaking.... but I love the positive ending.... it truly shows who you are!!
Hugs
Jenni


Re: Broken Porcelain (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 10:34:54 PM AEST
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Love the tittle, and the way

it draws one in, it speaks

softly but with purpose and

inquisitivness, a lovely write

my friend . . .



Ben



Re: Broken Porcelain (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 11:14:48 PM AEST
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Nobody can confine us in chains if we do not let them.
There are many kinds of chains this I know......
Touching write.

hugs
Shall


Re: Broken Porcelain (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 11:16:49 PM AEST
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Nobody can confine us in chains if we do not let them.
There are many kinds of chains this I know......
Touching write.

hugs
Shall


Re: Broken Porcelain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 07:55:22 AM AEST
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*sigh*

Don't ya hate it when people try to invalidate your feelings?

This one floors me. These are the kinds of writes by you that I spoke of the other day. You write with such conviction and power it is amazing. It's also kinda scary in a way. *shudders* cause I'd hate to be on the receiving end. However, you are so full of understanding and compassion you can end it on a positive note: Hopefully one day forgive
Maybe one day we can close this book
And laugh at these cracks
Instead of hide them
Yeah, that's what I'm talking about.

*incredibly huge hug*


Love,


Tim



Re: Broken Porcelain (User Rating: 1 )
by Robert_Edgar_Burns on Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 10:23:04 AM AEST
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True love is unconditional, without reservation, and
without any strings or performance quotas attached.
Like a parent loves a child, even when they misbehave.
Always standing behind them, even if it takes you to
hell and back. This kind of love, can no man chain!
It's porcelain is bonded over IRON!
Blessings,
Lawdog


Re: Broken Porcelain (User Rating: 1 )
by callme_spart on Thursday, 20th November 2008 @ 03:25:49 AM AEST
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so sad. what a beautifully tragic dilemma. i hope you were able to break the chains and pain


Re: Broken Porcelain (User Rating: 1 )
by lnnie on Sunday, 28th December 2008 @ 01:16:22 AM AEST
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"You turn your soul around
To make sure the cracks aren't showing"

Never more beautiful lines ever written.
Great stuff


Re: Broken Porcelain (User Rating: 1 )
by Deadson on Saturday, 2nd April 2011 @ 09:02:36 PM AEST
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