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Set In Stone Forever
Contributed by
Eireannach
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Sunday, 23rd November 2008 @ 12:59:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Lay your head upon my chest
And hear my heart speak to yours
I want to be one with no other, no other ever
Together, yet apart for a season
One we shall be someday as truth in all ways
The day, that day shall be ours
Come let me gaze into the eyes
That cause time to cease
Of green with such depth
Eire herself envies to scorn
A touch, a fragrance, a kiss
Fresh newness with each rising sun
A sun that burns less bright
Than you my love, rising in my soul
Of a fact mo cuishle,
Forged we are on destinys anvil
Purified love by trials fire
Polished through passion shared
Thus you shall ever be my hearts desire
O thrill of my soul
Calm your anxious mind
And set in stone forever my love for you
That changes not but through strengths increase
2008 O Raithbheartaigh
Copyright ©
Eireannach
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2008-11-23 12:59:58]
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Re: Set In Stone Forever
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by lnnie on
Sunday, 23rd November 2008 @ 03:26:39 PM AEST
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Ah such a lovely thought, a lovely poem, well done
well crafted
if poems come with time attached.
then this one
comes with time entombed
set in stone.
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Re: Set In Stone Forever
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by Loende on
Sunday, 23rd November 2008 @ 03:56:08 PM AEST
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OH MY GOSH... this is amazing verse. It is a testament to the knowing that comes with real love. You have captured a range of emotion and longing that few are able to. I love all of it, but the last stanza really made me smile. Job well, so very well, done.
Be well,
Loende |
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