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Contributed by
Balmain_Tiger
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Friday, 26th December 2008 @ 04:27:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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There is a buried treasure chest there for you to see It is in the ocean buried deep up to the knee From a rock marked X take fifty paces from the tree In the chest you will find what is left of me
My world my life my love and what I reminisce All of those sacred things no longer do I miss Now that I have departed from your horrid place My world is now open covered in wide open space
I am free to explore and find a new love In my skin tight jeans that fit like a glove I have this great body that I built for sex And soon Ill find the one for me to hex
Saturday, 27 December 2008 9:11:34 AM
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Re: Changes
(User Rating: 1 ) by anomalei on
Sunday, 28th December 2008 @ 12:03:21 PM AEST (User
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very interesting and i enjoyed reading it
fun rhyme scheme, although i think you should've kept consistent.
either all four lines rhyme, or an aabb scheme. but it's okay! i still loved it nonetheless!
*Jemma- |
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