|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
call my name
Contributed by
spooky
on
Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 09:01:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
were have we been,
were have we gone,
no one knows me,
for i know them not,
you say my name
as if you knew me before,
but you didn't you guest my name,
were have you been,
when i needed you most,
where you have invaded my dreams,
and i cant sleep no more
you knew my name,
and you call it no more,
what did i do wrong,
i'am lost to the world,
that knew me not,
to find my way back home,
to find you there,
call my name,
and i will find you there,
if you still want me,
as much as i want you,
just call me by my name,
and i'll be home,,
craig s. meeks
Copyright ©
spooky
... [
2008-12-27 21:01:57]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: call my name
(User Rating: 1 )
by anomalei on
Sunday, 28th December 2008 @ 11:47:17 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
it was interesting, i'll give you that.
i liked the repetiveness of certain lines, but i think there's some grammar/spelling to be fixed.
:)
*Jemma- |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
