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a dream
Contributed by
funmi
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Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 09:35:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Theres a dream
Hiding behind the rims
As you walk behind footsteps of truth
You begin to believe in the future
The route to success
Might seem like torture
It is hard to get to the top
But its easy to get to the bottom
It is hard to pass
But is easy to fail
But a dream can free you from jail
Theres a dream
Supporting you like team
As you grow up
You make important decisions
The right options can make you blow up
Or can put you in a critical position
Spread your wings to the right direction
And watch your life live to perfection
Copyright ©
funmi
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2008-12-29 09:35:02]
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Re: a dream
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by anomalei on
Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 12:35:08 PM AEST
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i liked the rhythm, the bits of rhyme you have here... overall a wonderful write.! =]
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Re: a dream
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by Butterflyperfect on
Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 03:02:21 PM AEST
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Very nice thought. I never thought of it that way.
Great Write!
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