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Fade to Black
Contributed by
lnnie
on
Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 11:40:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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You can break my heart
but it is a heart
only you can fix.
You can cut me with a word
but ironically
only your words can heal.
You can walk away
and you can come back.
I can talk insistently
but you can sooth
my rough talk.
I sometimes curse the thought of you
and you can make that curse turn to honey.
Solving this dilemma though
only I can do that.
Only I can pick up this canvass
look at the scene
and paint you out.
Only I can go to my mental closet
of memories
take out your mental photograph
and make it fade to black.
Only I can do that.
And I will one day;
just not today.
I still want
you back.
I still want
you back.
Not ready
to fade
to black.
Copyright ©
lnnie
... [
2008-12-29 11:40:27]
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Re: Fade to Black
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by anomalei on
Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 12:40:12 PM AEST
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this is now becoming one of my favorites.
something i can relate to...
i love the.. i guess you could call it a metaphor, any way i love the general idea used here, the rawness of everything behind the words... great write!
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Re: Fade to Black
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 04:20:23 PM AEST
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a superb write. it flowed brilliantly and the ending was great. good work.
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