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anticipation. . .
Contributed by
elle
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Wednesday, 31st December 2008 @ 11:59:44 AM in AEST
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Haiku
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concealed in a sigh by innocence & desire a precious moment
Copyright ©
elle
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2008-12-31 11:59:44] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: anticipation. . .
(User Rating: 1 ) by lidachur on
Wednesday, 31st December 2008 @ 03:24:28 PM AEST (User
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I loved it. Keep writing. |
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Re: anticipation. . .
(User Rating: 1 ) by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 31st December 2008 @ 06:09:17 PM AEST (User
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a good job |
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Re: anticipation. . .
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st December 2008 @ 07:14:21 PM AEST (User
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nice work.
-phil |
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Re: anticipation. . .
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spike on
Friday, 2nd January 2009 @ 01:34:48 AM AEST (User
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so beautiful and familiar. made me squirm, this one.
Spike |
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Re: anticipation. . .
(User Rating: 1 ) by lnnie on
Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 12:41:28 PM AEST (User
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So pithy, so true, so wonderfully written
Something to aspire to.
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Re: anticipation. . .
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd February 2009 @ 01:40:17 AM AEST (User
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Re: anticipation. . .
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st April 2009 @ 01:01:35 PM AEST (User
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Okay, like that's sensual and a tad naughty. :-) It's probably the naughtiness that made that blank message appear. The way you can pack so much power with so very few words amazes me. |
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Re: anticipation. . .
(User Rating: 1 ) by windowguy on
Saturday, 16th May 2009 @ 09:48:03 AM AEST (User
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This says it so well.Nice. |
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