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If I Could
Contributed by
BEE
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Wednesday, 21st January 2009 @ 05:36:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If I could
If I could tell you how I felt
Would it change everything
if I could tell you how I felt
Would you make the change for me
If I could tell you how I felt
Would you still be there next to me
If I could tell you how I felt
Would let me treat you the way you should be treated
If I could tell you how I felt
Could we make it all work
If I could tell you how I felt would
Would you take my hand
If I could tell you how I felt
We could make things amazing
By branden goodrich
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BEE
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2009-01-21 17:36:54]
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Re: If I Could
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by anomalei on
Wednesday, 21st January 2009 @ 07:03:21 PM AEST
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a little repetitive, but fantastic overall. i like your ideas, thoughts in this...
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