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dance your way on...
Contributed by
eternalsunshine
on
Friday, 23rd January 2009 @ 10:30:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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dance, dance, dance
the way to your soul
let go and feel the wind
let it take you high
dance, dance, dance
the way to your soul
let it grab & take hold of you
and you will fly, to the core
dance, dance, dance
the way to your soul
feel the ecstasy
now your getting close
dance, dance, dance
the way to your soul
let it play with you
enjoy the endless ride
dance, dance, dance
the way to your soul
let it caress you
make love to you
dance , dance, dance
your way to your soul
feel every moment of it
make love to eternity...
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eternalsunshine
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2009-01-23 22:30:32]
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Re: dance your way on...
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by anomalei on
Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 05:10:23 PM AEST
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i like the repetition here; all the ideas you've expressed, the short stanzas... i loved it all.
excellent.
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