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Only Sunset
Contributed by
whjmackenzie
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Sunday, 15th February 2009 @ 12:09:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In the beginning there was darkness
And only intermittent hope broke the night with prospective colour.
And then in one incredible instant, life transformed:
And you (realise and) scream: I have always loved you
And I scream: I dont want to miss you ever again!
But that is not enough.
And my heart begs me to follow with these words:
You are the best thing that could ever happen to a boy like me.
But the Sun has set.
And we have died, long before I could say them out loud...
For darkness will engulf everything (even love).
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whjmackenzie
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2009-02-15 12:09:29]
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Re: Only Sunset
(User Rating: 1 )
by anomalei on
Monday, 16th February 2009 @ 06:01:04 PM AEST
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ohhh goodness.
this is deeply, darkly, wonderfully beautiful.
basic, short&sweet... yet your words spoke powerfully.
loved it..
*JAE~ |
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