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Peregrinate Wisher

Contributed by kye on Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 12:08:50 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry



Simpering flower fall
From heights above the sea
Close your every petal
From pasts not meant to be

Christened from the loam
Where vines are twisted dry
Drift on towards the sunset
Where whitened beaches lie

Redundant in your yearnings
Of angels plumed and down
Enthralled by flushing blossoms
Of pigments unrenowned

Seized to passions grand
Amongst the soaring high
Past each born creation
Amongst the grand lanai

Now settle into valleys
A crevice from the flow
My peregrinate wisher
Blushed in journeys glow





Copyright © kye ... [ 2009-02-21 12:08:50]
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Re: Peregrinate Wisher (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 05:02:14 PM AEST
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Hmmmmm... methinks amongst the brilliant imagery and the trip through such beauty there is more hidden meaning within the analogies. I honestly don't know quite what it is but I enjoyed it nevertheless.

Thank you for an enjoyable read.

Tim
:-)


Re: Peregrinate Wisher (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 07:10:08 PM AEST
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beautiful imagery and beautiful words, good work.

-phil


Re: Peregrinate Wisher (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 10:51:22 PM AEST
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Beautifully written......
Jenni


Re: Peregrinate Wisher (User Rating: 1 )
by ShaonKra on Sunday, 22nd February 2009 @ 03:06:15 PM AEST
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Good poetry, very natural style that just tickles the tounge, keep it up

-ShaonKra-


Re: Peregrinate Wisher (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 09:52:30 AM AEST
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My dearest Kie, the poem from first line to last line created fantastic images in my mind...
I read it twice to feel the flow of your conciousness and found that the experience behind
the words is sweet and beautiful. I love it.. :-)venkat


Re: Peregrinate Wisher (User Rating: 1 )
by dark_poet on Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 07:58:28 PM AEST
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thanks for your comment on my piece. i appreciate it.

this piece has beautiful imagery and its short and sweet. the emotion is on point from start to finish. for someone who just started out writing(i noticed only 2 posts by you), it was fantastic. the structure and flow was on point. i could not spot any flaws with this piece you have written. excellent job!

now i wish i could write like you haha :D

take care


Re: Peregrinate Wisher (User Rating: 1 )
by lnnie on Sunday, 8th March 2009 @ 01:48:03 PM AEST
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Thanks for your very very thoughtful comments.
I have read wisher and moonlight. I agree with the
brilliantcy you have in writing. Your poems litterally shine on the page. Wish I could do that the way you do it.
Looking for more, as you write.


Re: Peregrinate Wisher (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 13th March 2009 @ 10:16:31 PM AEST
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Eloquently beautiful.
huggs,
emy
welcome home girl.


Re: Peregrinate Wisher (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Tuesday, 5th May 2009 @ 07:33:03 PM AEST
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such depth of emotion. . . truly beautiful. . .
your poem brings back fond memories of dandelion seedlings floating on the wind
of childhood wishes. . . shall we. . . make a wish? peace. elle


Re: Peregrinate Wisher (User Rating: 1 )
by Balmain_Tiger on Sunday, 7th June 2009 @ 04:00:27 PM AEST
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Vivid and surreal. Makes the reader read the words and search their feelings.




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