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The girl in white
Contributed by
Gothchick
on
Wednesday, 8th April 2009 @ 03:10:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
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She walked over the deserted streets
with in her hand the rose he had given her
The flower was withered
like the girl herself
she incurred this bridge and stopped halfway
looking over the watersurface
the moon reflected on the canal
"one day ill be there" she sighed, then walked away
Every night this girl appeared at the bridge
and stared in the water for a while
she let a few tears and then passed by
Every night, in the same black dress
never seen a girl with such pale skin
something made her feel less
One night it was all different..
A girl showed up at the bridge
she leaned over the guardrail
then took a deep breath..
On a cold november morning
the bridge was crowded with people
a girl was found in the canal
with a white dress stuck to her skin
A skin so pale as the moonlight
Even though she was no more
her eyes were still filled with despair
"Why did she do this to herself"
that was the sentence on repeat
well her story is simple
it was me ..
Copyright ©
Gothchick
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2009-04-08 15:10:33]
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Re: The girl in white
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 8th April 2009 @ 08:01:32 PM AEST
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A sad tale but well written.
It presented itself well with the images you created.
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Re: The girl in white
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by TeRrahiel on
Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 02:58:44 AM AEST
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| It created an image inside my mind - I could imagine the whole story. That means that the poem must be great:) |
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Re: The girl in white
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by Gothchick on
Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 10:16:42 AM AEST
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| Thank you ^^ |
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Re: The girl in white
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by lnnie on
Tuesday, 28th April 2009 @ 08:37:24 PM AEST
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Wow Goth, you have such a great talent. I don't say that to say that.
You do.
Keep writing. Don't see much else from you, but please do. |
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