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Breathe
Contributed by
kwood003
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Thursday, 30th April 2009 @ 11:20:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Breathe in
Try, as hard as you can Take it all in ,as long as you can As much as possible Till you feel your lungs stretch
Breathe out
Give up, As much as you need Let it all out, As long as you need As much as possible Till you feel your lungs collapse
Dont hold your breath Dont Die
Breathe in Breathe out
Live
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kwood003
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2009-04-30 23:20:54] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Breathe
(User Rating: 1 ) by anomalei on
Saturday, 2nd May 2009 @ 08:38:05 AM AEST (User
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simple.. poems don't need to be complicated.
still full of imagery and life.. but without thinking too hard about it. because breathing is simple..
oh you did a fantastic job with this!
*JAE~ |
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