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Crystal Shard
Contributed by
Balmain_Tiger
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Friday, 1st May 2009 @ 11:20:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Deep inside there is much good
For me to know that if I could
Make for me what I would
With those I care that really should
Yet I find things so hard
And my journey is quite marred
A shattered crystal this my shard
My life a game, no instruction card
All the pieces just dont fit
A missing piece from my kit
How far is the bottom before I hit
I must conjure as I sit
A struggle from the deep below
With one small hope left to show
Something new now in tow
Will this boost my fading glow
Wednesday, 10 September 2008
1:47 AM
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2009-05-01 11:20:02]
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Re: Crystal Shard
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by anomalei on
Saturday, 2nd May 2009 @ 08:43:06 AM AEST
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i like the rhyme scheme here... not an every-other like most would do...with each stanza you say something slightly different and rhyme all the words in that way... i like it!
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